Bad Sex Award

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Bad Sex Award

I usually don’t like to judge other’s writing so harshly but some of these scene’s really missed the mark.  There’s artistic license and then there is a complete lack of –well– just giving a f**k.  I’m sure this is what people mean by really trimming the fat in writing.  For most of the scenes, if they weren’t a necessary part of the plot, I would have hacked them quick.

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